Questions About The First Essay

1  What was your main point (thesis)? my moral was that all people don't learn the same way.

2.   Who was your audience? my audience was my family and my teacher Sonia Begert. I tailored it by adding story like elements rather than just stating the facts which made it much more interesting. 

3.   What feedback or reactions did you get at various times while composing this paper, I mostly got feedback on adding more details or make the story come to life more. i was able to make use of this by adding more details.    

  

4.      What did you find interesting about the process you went through in writing this paper, and what did you learn from it? i learned that if i give my story more details your audience is able to understand the story better. 

5.      What questions do you have for me about the paper?  (What part(s) of the paper would you like me to focus on?  What do you see as the paper’s strengths, and what areas are you unsure of?) i think that i did quite good job making sure the reader was able to understand the story, and follow along with the story.