In Class Lab Response to Questions Peer Essay

In Class Lab Response to Questions Peer Essay                          Morgan Carlson 11/4/15

Is the guiding question behind your analysis clear? The main question is found in introduction, how the car company’s see your desire for adventure and experiences and play upon them telling you that buying their car would make you have more adventures

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How does the opening capture the audience’s interest? It tells you that (you could use a little excitement!). This analysis maters because? He tells us that there are a lot of life experiences out there to be had.

Is the subject described in enough detail for your intended audience? I think that it is given in good detail describing what each car ad Is trying to convey.

What insights have you gained from the analysis? I have learned what car companies are trying to explain with their ads and how the advertisers are trying to cater their ads to your intentions and desires.

Is the point of your analysis clear? The analysis is clear, giving each observation before the picture of the ad.

What evidence do you provide to support your point? The evidence used is of car ads in which cars pictures are analyzed and how they make us want to go adventuring

If you’ve cited sources, are they credible and convincing? They are very convincing/credible because they are ads from car companies with their brands on them.

Have you addressed other perspectives? There were no other opinions to be addressed or to argue with the thesis.

How would you describe your tone? The tone informative to the reader, it was more just stating information.

How effective is the analysis designed? This analysis was designed quite well moving though each ad he then told you how that it corresponds to the thesis statement.

How is the analysis organized? This ad analysis was well organized it first hooks the reader in with the thesis it then brings the reader though each ad and gives a conclusion to sum up the analysis.  

Consider style: He was quite formal, he moved through each ad giving what he observed then he went into his thoughts on all of the ads he observed.  

    

How does the draft conclude? The draft concludes by telling you what conclusions he found from looking at the four ads.

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