How Writing Paper #3 was Different

How Writing Paper #3 was Different than Paper #2 and Paper #1

  The first paper was about my personal experience how I taught a friend to read this was different this was different than my third paper because it was writing about my personal experience, the third paper was about trying to convince someone to do something using other people’s words. 

  The second paper was analyzing ads this was like the third paper in the way that we were looking at other people’s words basically analyzing an argument of why you should buy a certain product except these ads did not give the con only telling you what was good about there “product”. In the third paper though we gave both pro and con which I think had more persuasive value than just stating the pro part of the argument. One more challenging aspect about the third paper was finding sources that would support your argument and be credible. In conclusion I think that the third paper was harder to write, but in the end it has more value to the reader.     

What is the meaning of Rethoric

 I read rhyme reasons blog about rhetoric and i have most the exact though about it but i did say it in a little bit different way. each person interprets rhetoric in a different way they have about the same meaning but they say it in a different way. I also read Leah niemans blog about rhetoric many of the ideas we have about rhetoric are very similar something that is written. When you talk to most people and ask them about rhetoric they think of great writers and not movie producers or ad makers, but these are all forms of rhetoric that important in our daily lives.

Class Lab 11/15

Chris Osterndorf of the Wall Street (for free college)

Journalhttp://www.dailydot.com/opinion/bernie-sanders-free-college-tuition/

This article is very similar to Katherine Spriggs article about small farms  

http://www.slate.com/blogs/moneybox/2013/11/20/college_shouldn_t_be_free_three_big_problems_with_free_college.html (Against Free college)

“ridding tuition from students would have the college/ university thirst for more money.”

http://www.educationdive.com/news/5-pros-and-cons-of-obamas-free-community-college-plan/356289/

According to EducationDive.com, President Obama’s plan for free college comes with many pros and cons. Con: Partisan opposition

The plan may be dead in the water already, considering that it requires Congress to approve spending for the idea and the Republican majority is unlikely to support it. Sen. Lamar Alexander (R-TN), chairman of the Senate’s education committee, has stated he opposes the plan and that it should be up to individual states to provide a free community college option, similar to Tennessee’s program.

Pro: It could still be accepted below the federal level

Despite the stated opposition of Republicans in Congress, the idea has garnered bipartisan support below the federal level: In a state, with Tennessee’s GOP leadership, for example. And with Chicago, which is led by Democrats. Presenting the free community college plan puts the idea in the national conversation, even if it ultimately doesn’t come to fruition. In pointing out problems with the plan, critics may be forced to present better alternatives, and workable solutions can emerge.

In Class Lab Analyzing an Argument

Position Paper Analysis

Morgan Carlson

1. Main point is about what it means to keep a cow and why one should keep a cow as stated in the first paragraph in the essay.

2. The author compares store bought milk along with milk produced at home using his personal experience. Along with the breakdown of several dangers of producing raw milk the author thoroughly explains the best way to do so.

3. With a balance of good and bad aspects for reasons why one should and should not own a cow. The author shows favoritism toward the wanting to own a cow. The author also tells of the great importance one needs to know in order to go though with owning a cow.

4. By using outside sources to support his position the author was able to have a good definition on the maintenance of owning a cow along with the way the manure needs to be handled in order to avoid the contamination of drinking water and crops nearby.

5. with the points written with in this paper i have learned quite a bit about the process of gaining milk.

              Analysis by Clifford Nordstrom          

Final Paper English 101

English 101

Dr. Sonia Begert

Morgan Carlson

December 1, 2015

Keeping a Family Milk Cow

     A number of generations have passed since a family milk cow was common. With the growing trend for self-sufficiency, a desire for healthy organic foods, and food security many people are considering adding a cow to their small acreage farm. With two acres, a good fence, and a small shelter it is possible to decide to have a cow. Cows eat a lot of food and produce a lot of waste. Cows also create a delicious healthy food that people can live off of. Their manure is a wonderful way to amend your garden and your field will always look trimmed and mown. Looking out into your pasture watching your cow turn grass into milk, gives a satisfying feeling of contentment and well-being. In this essay I will explain how cows will make a great addition to any farm and enhance your life.

      With the proper amount of pasture, hay, and fresh water a healthy cow will produce a sufficient amount of milk for a family.  A cow can provide a majority of a family's caloric intake with milk, yogurt, and cheeses. Homemade dairy foods create a vital, life sustaining diet. Many frontier families literally lived off their family cow.  In order to produce milk a cow needs to first have a baby calf. Yes, breeding is necessary in order to have milk. There are people trained in artificial insemination who can breed your cow without having to keep a bull. As long as you continue to milk a cow it continues to produce milk, a cow can go for several years on one lactation cycle. Milking can be done on your schedule as long as it is done regularly. If you leave the calf nursing it is possible to milk only once per day reducing the amount of time needed for care. Milking can be done by hand or with a milking machine. This process can usually be accomplished within one half hour including cleanup. Knowledge of dietary needs, diseases and their potential impact is necessary to reduce any health problems your cow could develop. The health of your animal directly influences the quantity and quality of the milk. This type information is readily available in books and on-line. The reason you would choose a family milk cow is mostly the milk.

      Fresh milk from the cow needs to be tasted to help make your decision. Fresh products of any kind generally have a superior flavor. Store bought homogenized milk has a watery consistency in my opinion. Fresh milk is full of a variety of flavors ranging from nutty to creamy. Depending on the season and what your cow has been eating will subtly change the delicate nuances in the milk. This influences not only the beverage of milk but the types of cheese you may choose to make. My family makes cheddar, capturing a nutty flavor in the spring and a soft herbal cheese during the summer when the milk has a creamy quality.  You will need to judge for yourself.

     It is my belief that top quality raw milk is an important health building food. The decision to drink raw milk is a personal one. The government provides many stern warnings regarding the dangers of raw milk. Raw milk can contain dangerous bacteria such as Salmonella, E. coli, and Listeria. Many occurrences of these contamination's occurred when industrialized farming began. Practicing safe handling can eliminate the possibility of problems. Since you are milking yourself you can control this handling, unlike purchasing it from an outside source. Pasteurizing your own milk is possible and relatively easy if this is a concern, however; 10 million people in the U.S. alone actively seek out raw milk. Studies have shown it to protect against infection, diarrhea, rickets, tooth decay, and TB. In early animal studies, animals fed raw milk had better growth, denser bones, greater integrity of internal organs, less anemia, fewer signs of anxiety and stress, and fewer signs of nutrient deficiency than animals fed pasteurized milk. Problems were attributed to pasteurization's destruction of lipase.  Dr. J. R. Crewe article on “Pediatr Gastroenterol Nutr.” “In the early 1900's the Mayo Clinic administered the “Milk Cure”, which consisted  of drinking 4-5 quarts of raw milk a day, obtaining favorable results for a range of illnesses including cancer, kidney disease, allergies, skin problems, urinary tract problems, prostate problems and chronic fatigue. These results were not obtained with pasteurized milk.” Many studies have linked consumption of pasteurized milk with lactose intolerance, allergies, asthma, ear infections, gastrointestinal problems, diabetes, auto-immune disease, attention deficit disorder and constipation. According to Westin Price “Over 80% of those advised by a health care professional who were lactose intolerant were able to consume raw milk without a problem.” There is substantial epidemiological evidence from studies in Europe that consumption of raw milk during childhood may protect against asthma, allergies and other immune-mediated diseases.” In an article of Chris Kressers “Let's Take Back Your Health.” A large cross-sectional study demonstrated a significant inverse association between “farm milk” consumption and childhood asthma, rhino conjunctivitis, sensitization to pollen and other allergens. It is thought that low dose exposure to a variety of bacteria may help regulate immune responses. Another hypothesis is that the higher level of omega-3 fatty acids in grass fed dairy help eliminate hyper allergic reactions. Raw milk is less susceptible to contamination than pasteurized milk due to its probiotic bacteria and antimicrobial enzymes. However, hygiene standards are important when handling unpasteurized dairy products.”

   Raw milk usually comes from cows that graze on grass. Raw milk contains lactic acid producing bacteria that protect against pathogens. Pasteurization destroys these helpful organisms, leaving the finished product devoid of any protective mechanism should undesirable bacteria inadvertently contaminate the supply. Raw milk in time turns pleasantly sour while pasteurized milk lacking the beneficial bacteria, will putrefy. That is not all that pasteurization does to milk. Heat alters milk's amino acids making the whole complex of proteins less available; it promotes rancidity of unsaturated fatty acids and destruction of vitamins. Vitamin C is usually completely lost and it alters mineral components such as calcium, chlorine, magnesium, phosphorus, potassium, sodium, and Sulphur as well as many trace minerals making them less available. Pasteurized milk puts a strain on the pancreas to produce digestive enzymes this explains why milk consumption in civilized societies is linked to diabetes. Pasteurization destroys all the enzymes in milk. The test for successful pasteurization is the absence of enzymes. Many people experience digestive and other problems when they consume pasteurized milk, but have no trouble with raw milk. Fresh raw milk is easily available from your family cow even though many states have outlawed it for commercial production.

Manure

     A lactating cow can produce 150 lbs. of manure daily. Is this a problem or a benefit? Fresh manure contains microbes that may be dangerous.  If manure touches food it can cause food borne illnesses. While in the process of decomposing the microbial activity creates heat that can burn your plants.  If it is not stored in an appropriate location runoff can cause drinking water to become contaminated. The smell is also something that comes to mind when discussing manure. This all sounds like a disaster however, according to Carl Rosen “manure is an excellent organic fertilizer and has been used since the dawn of agriculture to increase plant production. Manure increases the organic matter in soil and increases the water-holding capacity in sandy soils while increasing drainage in clay soils. It reduces water and wind erosion and promotes the growth of earth worms.” If it is stored and composted you can make sure that no runoff occurs. Wheelbarrows, buckets, and equipment that have touched fresh manure should not touch produce that will be eaten raw.  It should be incorporated into the soil when it has been aged. If you didn't have a cow, commercially processed bagged manure is available to purchase. This would eliminate any risk of being exposed to pathogens in raw manure. The catch to this is that the manure is from commercial feed lots and probably contains antibiotics and other products that an organic homestead is trying to avoid. The manure from your family cow usually contains bedding which is carbon rich. The manure is nitrogen rich so when composting this is the perfect blend. With the proper carbon/nitrogen ratio the manure pile will break down rapidly and any smell can be eliminated by adding more high-carbon material like dry leaves, sawdust, or hay, to reduce it. Once composted you will have a beautiful, crumbly, black, odorless soil to put on all your plants.  Manure is a valuable fertilizer for any farming operation and has been for centuries to supply needed nutrients for crop growth. With proper handling this product is frequently referred to as “black gold”.

     Owning a family cow provides lots of practical benefits. With the appropriate hygiene practices and proper waste management your cow will provide a wealth of rewards. Cows eating a grass-based diet provide a great tasting, nutritious, health giving drink that can't be found in the grocery store. Your precious soil amendment, “black gold”, will remarkably improve your vegetable garden. You will make time to milk and enjoy the gratification and serenity that a cow can bring. There are many good reasons to consider a cow or two.

    

Sources

Kresser, Chris. “Let's Take Back Your Health.” Raw Milk Reality. May 18, 2012. WEB

Rosen, Carl and Bierman Peter. M., Using Manure and Compost as Nutrient Sources for Fruit and Vegetable Crops. University of Minnesota. Dept. of Soil and Water, and Climate. Web.

Price Weston. A campaign for real milk, Westin A. Price Foundation Feb. 5, 2014. web.

Crewe  J. “J Pediatr Gastroenterol Nutr.” forerunner of the Mayo Clinic in Rochester, Minnesota,1986 Mar-Apr;5(2):242-7. Web.

class assignment

Bernie Sanders is at it again. The ubiquitously viral Senator’s latest move likely to appeal to the Democrats of the Internet generation involves a proposal to make public college education free. How would he do it? Simply by imposing a small transaction tax on Wall Street trades.

With college debt now having passed the $1 trillion mark, it’s clear that the current “pay beyond your means” methodology isn’t working. With persistent inflation and a crowded job market, something has to be done. And while imposing the Wall Street tax Bernie Sanders advocates for may or may not be that something, his main thesis is sound: It’s time to make public college free in America.Although the exact amount it would take to pay for public college tuition has been somewhat disputed, one figure is cited most commonly. “Tuition at public college scam to $62.6 billion in 2012, according to the latest government data,” writes Think Progress’s Bryce Covert. “That’s less than what the government already spends to subsidize the cost of college through grants, tax breaks, and work-study funds, which comes to about $69 billion. It spends another $107.4 billion on student loans.”

So, in theory, the government could get away with spending a little over $60 billion and be able to send the same amount of students attending public institutions now to their chosen schools for free. 

However, Jordan Weissmann, who has frequently advocated for free public college, also wrote a piece for Slate earlier this year where he observed that in 2012, Americans students actually spent $76.3 billion on tuition, which is more than the government could cover with their current aid budget. Ultimately, the roughly $8 billion difference between this budget and what students are really paying comes down to how money is categorized from state scholarships.

In the end, however, Weissmann still finds, “Either way you look at it, the federal aid budget should be enough to cover whatever today's college kids are paying out of pocket.” 

But whether the total cost of tuition is closer to $60 billion, $70 billion, or somewhere in between, the biggest question remains: What about the costs of college besides tuition? American students, especially those from the lower rungs of the economic ladder, frequently end up in debt after they graduate college not only because tuition is so high, but because of additional expenses like housing, transportation, and supplies.

Although she hasn’t outlined a specific plan yet, many have speculated that Elizabeth Warren’s calls for debt-free college are designed to address these extra costs. There are a number of ways this could be achieved. For instance, previously proposed solutions for debt-free college involve students working a certain number of hours per week at their school to pay for their education.

But this is hardly the only answer. The best case scenario might involve a combination of state-sponsored education, for which Sanders advocates, and a tuition-based system designed to determine how much a given student can pay for college by need, in order to reduce overall debt.

In a piece for the Atlantic piece, Weissmann outlines it thusly: “The reality is that tuition is not the biggest expense for most full-time undergrads at public colleges: It's cost of living. After all the other aid low-income students receive, Pell Grants and tax breaks often end up paying for their meals and rent. But if colleges continued charging at least some tuition for wealthier students, the money could be cycled back into living expense grants for the neediest.”That’s what free college is about. It’s not a state-sponsored initiative for every American to spend four years partying. It’s a way to ensure that our best and brightest are not crushed under a system that makes it hard for everyone but the richest Americans to get the education they deserve. 

Chris Osterndorf is a graduate of DePaul University's Digital Cinema program. He is a contributor at Heave Media, where he regularly writes about TV and pop culture.

A Summary of a Story from everyone's an author

A Summary of How in the World do You Get a Skunk Out of a Bottle.

This story starts off by describing the scene of a jogger on a cool fall day, he describes the sounds he hears, his labored breathing and the chunking noise his sneakers are making on the dirt. then he jumps into describing the skunk. he added very good detail so it felt as if you were seeing the skunk through his eyes and feeling his fear of the skunk. but after seeing the condition of the skunk he knows that it is his responsibility to save the skunk from certain death. Then he goes over the possibility's that would save the skunk in his mind. Then he made the decision and he starts to talk him self through the heroic act of kindness. Then after he finishes saving the skunk he is joyful and runs into the morning sunlight like a cowboy riding into the sunset.  

class lab 11/19

Chris Osterndorf of the Wall Street (for free college)

Journalhttp://www.dailydot.com/opinion/bernie-sanders-free-college-tuition/

This article is very similar to Katherine Spriggs article about small farms  

http://www.slate.com/blogs/moneybox/2013/11/20/college_shouldn_t_be_free_three_big_problems_with_free_college.html (Against Free college)

“ridding tuition from students would have the college/ university thirst for more money.”

http://www.educationdive.com/news/5-pros-and-cons-of-obamas-free-community-college-plan/356289/

According to EducationDive.com, President Obama’s plan for free college comes with many pros and cons. Con: Partisan opposition

The plan may be dead in the water already, considering that it requires Congress to approve spending for the idea and the Republican majority is unlikely to support it. Sen. Lamar Alexander (R-TN), chairman of the Senate’s education committee, has stated he opposes the plan and that it should be up to individual states to provide a free community college option, similar to Tennessee’s program.

Pro: It could still be accepted below the federal level

Despite the stated opposition of Republicans in Congress, the idea has garnered bipartisan support below the federal level: In a state, with Tennessee’s GOP leadership, for example. And with Chicago, which is led by Democrats. Presenting the free community college plan puts the idea in the national conversation, even if it ultimately doesn’t come to fruition. In pointing out problems with the plan, critics may be forced to present better alternatives, and workable solutions can emerge.

Draft of paper 3

English 101

Dr. Sonia Begert

Morgan Carlson

December 1, 2015

Keeping a Family Milk Cow

     A number of generations have passed since a family milk cow was common. With the growing trend for self-sufficiency and food security many people are considering adding a cow to their small acreage farm. With two acres, a good fence, and a small shelter it is possible to decide to have a cow. A cow is an investment of time and money. Cows eat a lot of food, and produce a lot of waste. Cows also create a delicious healthy food that people can live off of. Their manure is a wonderful way to amend your garden and your field will always look trimmed and mown. Looking out into your pasture watching your cow turn grass into milk, gives a satisfying feeling of contentment and well-being. Having a cow requires a decision. In this essay I will explain how cows will make a great addition to any farm.

      Knowledge of dietary needs, diseases and their potential impact is necessary to reduce any health problems your cow could develop. The health of your animal directly influences the quantity and quality of the milk. This type information is readily available in books and on-line. With the proper amount of pasture, hay, and fresh water a healthy cow will produce a sufficient amount of milk for a family.  A cow can provide a majority of a family's caloric intake with milk, yogurt, and cheeses. Home made dairy foods create a vital life sustaining diet. Many frontier families literally lived off their family cow.  In order to produce milk a cow needs to first have a baby calf. Yes, breeding is necessary in order to have milk. There are people trained in artificial insemination who can breed your cow without having to keep a bull. As long as you continue to milk a cow can go for several years on one lactation cycle. Milking can be done on your schedule as long as it is done regularly. If you leave the calf nursing it is possible to milk only once per day reducing the amount of time needed for caring for your cow. Milking can be done by hand or with a milking machine. This process can usually be accomplished within one half hour including cleanup.

      Fresh milk from the cow needs to be tasted to help make your decision. Store bought homogenized milk has a watery consistency in my opinion. Fresh products of any kind generally have a superior flavor. In my opinion fresh milk is full of a variety of flavors ranging from nutty to creamy. Depending on the season and what your cow has been eating will subtly change the delicate nuances in the milk. This influences not only the beverage of milk but the types of cheese you may choose to make. My family makes cheddar capturing a nutty flavor in the spring and a soft herbal cheese during the summer when the milk has a creamy quality.  You will need to judge for yourself.

      The government provides many stern warnings regarding the dangers of raw milk. Raw milk can contain dangerous bacteria such as Salmonella, E. Coli, and Listeria. Practicing safe handling can eliminate the possibility of this and since you are milking yourself you can control this handling unlike purchasing it from an outside source. Pasteurizing your own milk is possible and relatively easy if this is a concern however; 10 million people in the U.S. alone actively seek out raw milk. Raw milk usually comes from cows that graze on grass. Raw milk from a healthy grass fed animal can form an important part of a healthy diet. It is the kind of diet that can eliminate doctors.  Raw milk contains lactic acid producing bacteria that protect against pathogens. Pasteurization destroys these helpful organisms, leaving the finished product devoid of any protective mechanism should undesirable bacteria inadvertently contaminate the supply. Raw milk in time turns pleasantly sour while pasteurized milk lacking the beneficial bacteria, will petrify. That is not all that pasteurization does to milk. Heat alters milk's amino acids making the whole complex of proteins less available; it promotes rancidity of unsaturated fatty acids and destruction of vitamins. Vitamin C is usually completely lost and it alters mineral components such as calcium, chlorine, magnesium, phosphorus, potassium, sodium, and sulphur as well as many trace minerals making them less available. Pasteurized milk puts a strain on the pancreas to produce digestive enzymes explains why milk consumption in civilized societies is linked or diabetes. Pasteurization destroys all the enzymes in milk. The test for successful pasteurization is absence of enzymes. Many people experience digestive and other problems when they consume pasteurized milk, but have no trouble with raw milk. There is substantial epidemiological evidence from studies in Europe that consumption of raw milk during childhood may protect against asthma, allergies and other immune-mediated diseases. A large cross-sectional study demonstrated a significant inverse association between “farm milk” consumption and childhood asthma, rhino conjunctivitis, sensitization to pollen and other allergens. It is thought that low does exposure to a variety of commercial bacteria may help regulate immune responses. Another hypothesis is that the higher level of omega-3 fatty acids in grass fed dairy help reduce atopy risk. Unpasteurized milk is somewhat less susceptible to contamination than pasteurized milk due to its probiotic bacteria and antimicrobial enzymes. However, hygiene standards are important when handling unpasteurized dairy products. (Chris Kresser; Let's Take Back Your Health, Raw Milk Reality May 18, 2012. WEB)

  

Manure

     A lactating cow can produce 150 lbs. of manure daily. Is this a problem or a benefit? Fresh manure contains microbes that may be dangerous.  If manure touches food it can cause food borne illnesses. While in the process of decomposing the microbial activity creates heat that can burn your plants.  If it is not stored in an appropriate location runoff can cause drinking water to become contaminated. The smell is also something that comes to mind when discussing manure. This all sounds like a disaster however, manure is an excellent organic fertilizer and has been used since the dawn of agriculture to increase plant production. Manure increases the organic matter in soil and increases the water-holding capacity in sandy soils while increasing drainage in clay soils. It reduces water and wind erosion and promotes the growth of earth worms.(Carl Rosen and Peter M. Bierman; Dept. of soil and water, and climate University of Minnesota. Commercial Fruit and Vegetable Production Using Manure and compost as nutrient sources for fruit and vegetable crops)If it is stored and composted you can make sure that no runoff occurs. Wheelbarrows, buckets, and equipment that have touched fresh manure should not touch produce that will be eaten raw.  It should be incorporated into the soil when it has been aged. If you didn't have a cow commercially processed bagged manure is available to purchase. This would eliminate any risk of being exposed to pathogens in raw manure. The catch to this is that the manure is from commercial feed lots and probably contains antibiotics and other products that an organic homestead is trying to avoid. The manure from your family cow usually contains bedding which is carbon rich. The manure is nitrogen rich so when composting this is the perfect blend. With the proper carbon/nitrogen ratio the manure pile will break down rapidly and any smell can be eliminated by adding more high-carbon material like dry leaves, sawdust, or hay, to reduce it. Once composted you will have a beautiful, crumbly, black, odorless soil to put on all your plants.  Manure is a valuable fertilizer for any farming operation and has been for centuries to supply needed nutrients for crop growth. With proper handling this product is frequently referred to as black gold.

Food security, a health giving food with great taste, and a beneficial soil amendment influenced my family's decision to get a cow. As a matter of fact we got two.

class lab on service announcements

The theme they all had in common was that they both used emotional appeals to make their argument. In both videos they used personal narratives of friends and family to make the viewer feel connected or intimate with the subject by making the characters involved more real to the viewer. The differences in the approaches the two arguments made were that in Josh’s story it focused on the one individual story to make their argument. The AT&T video used the stories of more than one person to make their point. While both used emotional appeals to make their arguments they AT&T used logos as well when the officer stated how he comes across the type of situations often. (Statistics)

Katherine Spriggs On Buying Local

On Buying Local

Katherine Spriggs

1. Katherine Spriggs has convinced me to buy locally because she brought up many sources that support her argument she also brought up the fact that it is contributing to global warming.

2. She brings up other the opinions of people who think it would be wasteful to grow pineapples in the northeast, than to have them shipped them from the Caribbean.she responds by telling them that small farms have better output of all the products they produce.

3.the introduction is very effective because it kind of scares people into thinking about her argument.

4. the photos show how big farms are more like mono cultures than their smaller counter parts, the other picture brings you back to the introduction.   

           

brain storming ideas for final paper

why everyone should eat mushrooms
why everyone should garden
why everyone should be given two years of free college after high school
why we should not eat gmo

Joshes story

Joshes Story

I watched the distracted driving public service movie. This movie started off by interviewing Joshes friends, they all talked about how they found out about the crash then it went to the family talking about what Josh had done with his life about the movies he made and the drums he played, then it went into how the accident happened, Josh picking up the phone while he was driving making him crash of the side of the road. They then talked about their experience at the hospital crying over his death in the hallway with the mother rushing back into the emergency room. In the end all they wanted to tell everyone was to try to share his story to make sure that no one would make the same mistake.      

How Things Mean

Anthony Heaps

Cj Nordstrom

Kyra Kirby

Morgan Carlson

How Things Mean

The images in this grouping together also convey the concept of individual personality as the styles of a watch itself may vary and become a reflection of a quality each person may wish to convey.

The images in the Symbols of Patriotism grouping are communicating the collective symbols of the “Noble” attributes of their country.

Symbols of Patriotism: The bulldog is standing definitely and it looks like it is proud to be standing on the flag defending britain against all of her enemies.          

The american eagle - symbol for the United States of America, the Eagle is posted on every dollar and is a national symbol for American patriotism. The eagle is looks as if it is preparing for battle, flag seeming to symbolize camo paint that soldiers paint on their faces before going to battle, the eagles beak is sharp and its eyes give a fierce look in its eyes like it ready to pounce on any threat that arises.

The British Bulldog on the British flag became a popular symbol after World War 2 representing the determination of the country. This being because the Bulldog was seen as having a determined nature.

The Last symbol is France and instead of animals as its figure it instead has what seem to be 3 books stacked on top of eachother and say Liberte, Egalite, Fraternite which in english translate to Liberty, Equality and Fraternity

All of the flags are of the three colors, Red, White and Blue

  The Rolex watch suggests wealth and power. It’s extremely expensive, covered in diamonds, and usually worn by rich people in positions of power. The name Rolex is well known and the diamonds convey that it costs a lot of money.

  The Hello Kitty watch suggests a female owner who likes the character Hello Kitty, which is very well known. It’s got a picture of hello kitty on the watch face, and a few rhinestones, as well As the words Hello Kitty.

class lab the n'word analysis

Kyra Kirby

Cj Nordstrom

Morgan Carlson

Anthony Heaps

Reading Sources Critically

The argument the author makes is that white people cannot say the n-word. He uses examples of how other races i.e. jewish comedians may use “derogatory” jokes about themselves but if someone whom was not of that culture made those jokes they would be considered racist towards that particular community.

I find the argument to be quite persuasive. The arguments he makes are very clear; you can talk about your people, but no one else should. essentially saying jokes towards your group doesn't necessarily mean that other people from outside your group can make the same jokes toward your group.

The author’s stance is mainly towards common group relations and the use of certain language and speech toward other groups. Author also acknowledged rednecks and jewish people and the humor related to those two groups and how they can be considered offensive if miss used.

The publisher brings the stance of cultural diversity to the college at which he is presenting  (Boston College.)

I do recognize the idea that you shouldn’t joke about a community that you’re not a part of. If you aren’t Jewish, you shouldn’t make Jewish jokes, etc.

This source supports my position because I personally feel that if you aren’t part of that community, or have not been personally slighted, then you have no right to try to reclaim words that have been used as slurs.

I can tell that the intended audience are those of different cultural backgrounds other than those of the African American community, and the purpose is to bring awareness of the cultural diversity and etiquette.

Final Draft Advertisement analysis

Morgan Carlson

 Dr. Sonia Begert

English 101

11/1/15

 

 “Still a Kid at Heart”

 Advertisements Aimed at Our Inner Child

 

     Have you ever walked down the grocery store aisles and wondered why cans of corn, cereal boxes, and battery packages all have cartoon characters on them? Consider what makes a buyer trust a product. It involves experiences that they expect. The cartoon characters have qualities that imitate familiar relationships like fathers, playmates, and toys. The characters encourage emotional responses that are associated with happiness, excitement, and wonder. Advertisers use cartoon characters to target the consumer's inner child.

     Cartoon characters are one method advertisers use to create an association with an image rather than the products attributes. The key to branding a product is triggering an emotional response. How does the product make me feel? Rather than envisioning a real scene with workers making or growing a product, consumers think of the personality of the cartoon character. In reality, most people do not purchase all the competitors’ products and compare them. They purchase the product with the image that appeals to them. Through the character, products can become part of the family and of the buyers’ everyday lives. Branding in advertising is anything that helps get buyers to remain loyal to a product.  This technique was devised to promote brand image rather than the product’s qualities. 

  

   One well-known brand uses the image of a mythical figure that has a connection to many cultures around the world. The Green Giant has a smile and leafy suit and has the word Jolly in his name. The text states that, “More people today like the Green Giant’s peas and corn better than any others because HE puts more time and work into growing them that way. Special ways of making rich earth richer… watchful care each growing day… split-second timing to pick and pack at the fleeting moment of perfect flavor”. The ad reads as though the Giant is the one who has control of the product. It is the Giant, not the farmers with tractors that do all of the work. With child-like innocence we think of a big green giant who is responsible for all the work, not a factory with machines stamping labels on cans. The Giant resembles a green Santa Claus, Ho, Ho, Ho, magically bringing perfect vegetables to our tables. The Giant is the knowledgeable father-like figure in control of everything from the soil to the harvest.

   This image shows a family eating dinner dressed in suits and fancy dress with a table cloth and candelabra on the table. The scene suggests that Green Giant vegetables are not any run of the mill vegetable, but that they are suited to fancy dining. Flavor is not something that can be measured and is difficult to describe. An adoring family all look up to the well-dressed Giant sitting at the table with them. The woman is smiling so we assume that the food tastes good. Of course, the well-mannered Giant has a white shirt and tie with his cloth napkin on his lap. The larger than life image makes him the father figure to be trusted, respected and obeyed. He could be the father making sure you eat your vegetables.

    

     A father is not the only familiar figure in our inner child’s life. Tony the Tiger is the figure that Kellogg’s Frosted Flakes cereal developed. He uses the, “Put a Tiger on your Team.” slogan and is seen on a basketball court throwing boxes of cereal through the hoop. The text tells us four points: “1. Big, crisp flakes of corn, 2. Toasted clear through with Kellogg’s secret sugar frosting, 3.They are jumpin’ with energy! 4. They’re Gr-r-r-eat” We learn minimal facts that they are cornflakes with a secret sugar frosting. The other points are based on emotion. The flakes are not literally jumping. This suggests that his cereal will make you strong, energetic, and athletic. Tony personifies a teammate that has the qualities of a coach. This creates a connection with “kids” young and old who like sports. Kellogg’s takes something you already like and pairs it with something that they want you to like. Our inner child believes that if we eat the cereal that Tony thinks is great, we will be successful since we are on his team. We imagine we can be that athlete we always wanted to be. He is a friendly tiger but tigers can be ferocious if they want. This makes for a good sports player as well. We certainly wouldn’t have the same reaction if Tony was a real tiger. Brown flakes of corn in a plain box with black type would also not attract much attention. A familiar cartoon Tiger is now invited into many American’s homes every morning.

 

       Other animals that we welcome into our homes are stuffed animal toys. What better way to influence our inner child's life? The Energizer Battery Company uses a pink bunny banging on a drum with the Energizer logo, wearing sunglasses and sandals. This ad shows a bunny toy that continues going while other toys have stopped. He brings us back to our childhood days when we all had loveable stuffed animals. He is pink and fuzzy with cool sunglasses and sandals giving the impression he is easy going. He is simple with a universal appeal. The text is minimal including the Energizer logo and the words “Keep Going”. It does not reveal any information on the construction of the battery or say anything about what they are trying to sell, instead they sell you on the brand image. What kid wants his toys to stop working even if they are old “kids” running their radios, flashlights, etc.? The ad gives us a happy feeling which turns a boring battery into something fun and entertaining. A stuffed animal makes the product more approachable. This bunny is so popular that he has been seen in movies and the phrase “Energizer Bunny” is considered a term for things that continue endlessly. For consumers, this kind of image gives us a warm, fuzzy, feeling of dependability. Dependability, means the buyer can trust the product. Trust means more sales.

 

    An advertisements goal is to increase sales. Every sale starts with creating a desire in the consumer. Ads have conditioned the consumer to purchase the package with their familiar character. A father-like giant, a team player and coach, or a toy that is always there to play with, keep our inner child coming back for more. We need more fatherly advice, more playing with our teammates, and definitely toys that always keep working. Brand images are an abstract representation of the product they stand for. We sit down to dinner with the Green Giant, we eat breakfast with a Tiger, and we hope our toys keep going and going. They have become iconic representations that we can't resist. We purchase the products that have those symbols, and they have become part of our lives like a family. Maybe you don’t come out and say, “Oh, Tony thinks they’re great, I want some! Or, these are the batteries with the bunny” but the products still end up in the grocery cart. At any age everyone is still a kid at heart.

 

References

 

Energizer. www.energizer.com 2015. Web.

General Mills www,greengiant.com. 2014 web.

Kellogg Co. www.m.kelloggs.com 2012 web.

Mehta, Abhilasha. Purvis, Scott C. “Reconsidering Recall and Emotion in Advertising”. Journal of Advertising Research. March 2006. Web

Rushkoff, Douglas. “Why We Listen to What “They” Say.” Frontline KCTS 9. Chapter Five Nov. 9, 2004. Web.

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Cj Nordstrom

Kyra Kirby

Morgan Carlson

Class Lab

This poster presents its opinion by showing a picture of Hugh Jackman standing behind a giant robot boxer with a title above him saying courage is stronger than steel. In this movie poster they are saying that Hugh Jackman is stronger than steel because he has courage. this appeals to me because it is very cool picture of a giant robot and it is of one of my favorite movies. it uses the words (Reel Steel). If i was to change him for a different audience i would make him wear the armored suit.If i were going to create this ad in a different medium it would change the meaning of the ad to much to have the same meaning. If the ad was put in a movie trailer format the ad would be much more attention getting. 

Real Steel movie poster. Fanpop.com.2006-2015 A Member of Townsquare Entertainment News. print.

   

  The poster for Wreck-It Ralph shows its stance by having the main character, Ralph, in the middle, surrounded by his supporting characters. It’s saying that he is the most important character. The pixelated font used to display the movie title is a subtle way of telling you that it’s based off of old 8-bit video games. The blue background with Ralph’s repeating face integrates a part of his video games and contrasts with the red lettering of the title. The poster is appealing because it represents the most important characters in a simple and easy manner. The bright red draws you in while the cool blue brightens when it surrounds the characters, pulling your eye to them. Felix, one of the characters, is holding his signature hammer.

  To change this poster to appeal to a different audience, I would probably change the coloring and the position of the characters. I would make it grittier and darker, showing a different, less happy side of the movie. The characters would probably be in more of an action scene, with less emphasis on their bright coloring.

  If i were to create this in a different medium, I would probably use a movie trailer format and take scenes that displayed the emotion and tone of the film without spoiling the ending. Of course I would focus on Ralph, but I would take scenes in which he is interacting with the other characters, and add humorous scenes as well as a final, mood setting one.

Wreck-It Ralph. Advertisement. Collider. Web. 5 Nov 2015.

This poster shows its stance on “Drinking” and “Driving” or “Mothers Against Drunk Driving.” Why I chose this topic is because it is a well known thing in our schools. Teaching our kids not to drink and drive and try and put a stop on drinking while driving all together. Though it may be a hopeless tale to grasp these women stepped up to the plate and gave it a shot. The Poster itself is colored with a pitch black background with blood red lettering. Probably to create a somewhat dark surreal touch and hopefully grab the attention of the viewers. The above heading of the poster is the letters “M.A.D.D” following that is “Mothers Against Drunk Driving” all in caps most likely to create emphasis in the text. The below imagery we see a crossed out warning sign with an alcohol bottle and two wine glasses on either side. Likely to state that these things are not acceptable further supporting their stance against “Drunk Driving.” Bottom of the page we see two women, most likely the hosts of the film, looking toward the viewers with a goal in mind. If I were to change the way this message is displayed I would provide imagery of a crashed car and a crying women standing beside the car, providing a somewhat real life situation and getting the optimal attention of the viewers. I would keep the medium on poster but provide different imagery.

M.A.D.D Mothers Against Drunk Driving. Dir. William A. Graham. Perf. Mariette Hartley and Paula Prentiss. Universal TV. 1983. Web. 5 Nov 2015

In Class Lab Blog

·         When I was taking a point of view. I took a stand two days ago when I picked which topic I wanted to pick for my speech. I con
·         I was also opinionated on what to eat for dinner, the cook won out though because she was the     one that made the dinner.
·         People around me taking a point of view. Today in math class someone in the back was saying he was correct but the teacher kept deigning it.  
·         Today in English class they argued about some assignment. 

In Class Lab Response to Questions Peer Essay

In Class Lab Response to Questions Peer Essay                          Morgan Carlson 11/4/15

Is the guiding question behind your analysis clear? The main question is found in introduction, how the car company’s see your desire for adventure and experiences and play upon them telling you that buying their car would make you have more adventures

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How does the opening capture the audience’s interest? It tells you that (you could use a little excitement!). This analysis maters because? He tells us that there are a lot of life experiences out there to be had.

Is the subject described in enough detail for your intended audience? I think that it is given in good detail describing what each car ad Is trying to convey.

What insights have you gained from the analysis? I have learned what car companies are trying to explain with their ads and how the advertisers are trying to cater their ads to your intentions and desires.

Is the point of your analysis clear? The analysis is clear, giving each observation before the picture of the ad.

What evidence do you provide to support your point? The evidence used is of car ads in which cars pictures are analyzed and how they make us want to go adventuring

If you’ve cited sources, are they credible and convincing? They are very convincing/credible because they are ads from car companies with their brands on them.

Have you addressed other perspectives? There were no other opinions to be addressed or to argue with the thesis.

How would you describe your tone? The tone informative to the reader, it was more just stating information.

How effective is the analysis designed? This analysis was designed quite well moving though each ad he then told you how that it corresponds to the thesis statement.

How is the analysis organized? This ad analysis was well organized it first hooks the reader in with the thesis it then brings the reader though each ad and gives a conclusion to sum up the analysis.  

Consider style: He was quite formal, he moved through each ad giving what he observed then he went into his thoughts on all of the ads he observed.  

    

How does the draft conclude? The draft concludes by telling you what conclusions he found from looking at the four ads.

Consider the title:  N/A