Thursday, October 22, 2015

Textual Analysis Paper


1.      The publisher of our first ad about dog fur is from the PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals.).Our second ad about Walmart in support of animal cruelty is from Mercy for Animals. Our last ad is a dog adoption ad which is published by the American Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals.

2.      All these texts are intended for people who have compassion or a love for animals. For example, in the first ad the slogan is “If you wouldn’t wear your dog…please don’t wear any fur.” They are purposefully trying to make people feel compassion for animals that are skinned for fur.

3.      We can tell that the texts are intended for people who have compassion or love for animals because they are all focused on doing the most ethical choice for the animals, while pressuring people into having compassion. For example, in the ad about Animal Cruelty they are blaming Walmart for supporting Animal Cruelty and pressuring you into supporting their side, instead of Walmart. Also in the ad about adopting a dog, it pressures you into compassion for the dog because the ad is narrated from the dog’s point of view, and by relating on a personal level.

4.      The purpose of these texts are persuading you to support their cause or to sway your opinions about something. For the first ad, they are trying to prove and have people in support of equality between all animals. In the second ad the creators are trying to change the way Walmart and other companies treat their animals. In the last ad the creators are trying to persuade you into adopting a dog. All three ads main point is to get you to do something.

5.      The creators of the Walmart ad are trying to make people aware of what they are eating. This causes less amount of people to buy their animal products, which decreases Walmart’s profits, so they hopefully start to make a change. They are working towards their purpose by promoting their issues, and making a voice for themselves. All the ads are trying to address that ethical values trump overall. For example, in the Walmart ad, the makers of the ad are directly accusing Walmart of Animal Cruelty, giving Walmart a bad reputation. This makes people rethink their decisions.

6.      In the Walmart Animal Cruelty ad, it says, “Imagine being crammed inside a medal stall, barely larger than your own body, unable to turn around or lie down comfortably for nearly your entire life. You will never see the sun, breath fresh air, walk, play, or engage in any natural behaviors. This is the daily reality of pigs raised for Walmart’s pork.”

7.      As a group, all the ads inform you of a problem and advise you to take action.

Melissa Rubins Essay

Questions for Melissa Rubin Essay
1.       The insight she offers is that during the 1950’s American’s supported the veterans and that the culture was white male dominated, and that the labor force was working together.  The image shows men in business suits, blue collar workers, and men in uniform all together as a community with smiling faces. Only a few women in are the background wearing dresses.  Yes I have been persuaded to believe that this was true. The image does appear to describe what she is saying.
2.       She incorporates the labor struggles that the unions had, the fact that it was after the war, and that there was an exclusion of any black people. She mentions that Coke did have some famous blacks in other ads. The white men could be working class but the blacks had to be famous.
3.       What do the images symbolize in relation to what the product is offering? Are the images relevant to today’s world?
4.       Pemco Insurance says they are a lot like me. They talk about things that are common with Northwest residents; sandals with socks, goat herd guy, geodesic dome building, and wood carving. This ad is saying we are all unique which encompasses everyone. This is the same as the Coke ad appealing to as many “regular” people as possible. They are both based on stereotypes. They are both portraying the values of the people of the times.


Tuesday, October 20, 2015

2. Analytical thinking is another way of saying rhetorical thinking. It’s breaking the writing down into parts to better understand the contents of what you read. By breaking down text and phrases we can then figure out where the author stands, author’s point of view, author’s tone and so on. Many stories may hide their meaning but upon deeper analysis we find greater meaning.

4. The “Stay Sweet As You  Are” analysis paper fits the criteria by including the ads that it’s analyzing, breaking down the information in chronological order, and finding the main points of each ad. At the end, all three advertisements are compared and found to have the same main point: “pleasing men is the prerequisite for [a woman’s] happiness.”

5.I gathered form my group that thinking analytically is the same as thinking rhetorically

Narrative 101

Morgan Carlson
Dr. Sonia Begert
English 101
October 20, 2015.
Narrative 101
     I learned to read using a series of books about natural science. The series started with large bold type and simple words. Each sequential book increased in difficulty. The stories became more complex as the writing became smaller and the illustrations more ornate. It gave me a wealth of knowledge about all kinds of interesting animal behaviors and facts. I knew about owls, raptors, snakes, insects, reptiles, and amphibians. The books had unique and interesting tidbits of information that I shared with my friend George.
      George and I got together every week while our older siblings attended a class together. They were learning about Biology. George’s grandfather was a scientist so he knew all about that type of information. He was well skilled and offered to teach all the older kids. The books they had were very thick and they talked about scientific terms that we did not understand, they would dissect different dead things that had been ordered through a special Home school magazine. The formaldehyde took our breath away when the plastic wrappers came off the preserved creatures. We were happy to get out of there giving them the quiet that they needed. As a home school family, we were accustomed to having classes that were divided between the older and younger students. George was horrified by all the guts strewn across the table on those days and was more than happy to leave as quickly as possible. We obediently went outside about our business of playing, leaving the older kids to their studies.
     Frequently, George would be finishing a beginning reading lesson when I came in the door. George sat slumped in the straight backed chair as his mother systematically pointed at words sounding out each syllable with her mouth. His low voice croaked out noises as he struggled to repeat the words. He stared at the page with his round eyes half shut, his shoulders curved forward as if becoming part of the table, his fair hair blended into his kaki colored shirt. His mother finally released him so we could play outside in the woods to climb trees and play in the creek. The house was at the top of a hill. A gentle slope led down to mossy alder trees leaning in toward a small trickle of water rimmed with huge clumps of ferns. We spent all of our time together watching the insects, animals, and birds that visited the muddy edge. We studied the little foot prints and tried to determine who had made them. George was particularly interested in the Damselflies. One landed on a fallen log. Its slim body covered with iridescent wings shimmered in the filtered light. Pin-sized legs clung to the spongy bark. “That Damselfly is a male because he is more brightly colored.” I told George. He leaned forward with his stocky body, “How did you know that?” he asked. “I learned about them in my reading books. The eggs are laid in the soggy logs and then they hatch into nymphs. The nymphs molt repeatedly until they undergo metamorphosis.” George clung to every word I said. I continued, “The skin splits down the back, and they emerge and inflate their wings and abdomen to turn into their adult form.” George’s eyes grew large and his mouth dropped open. “You learn that in your reading books!” George chirped with excitement. ”I will bring you the first book next week. It is the one with the Damselfly story.” I said.
    His mother loomed like a shadow over the table as George grappled with the words. “The  b..b..box is on the h..h..hill.”  His large eyes looked hazy as I watched him glance to the side watching a fly bang repeatedly against the window pane. George’s round face transformed as he noticed that I had slipped quietly in the door. “Did you bring the book?” George piped. I pulled the first book of the series with the large type out from behind my back as though it was a surprise. He leaped up from the chair which fell backward crashing to the floor. “Please be careful George!” his mother screeched. “Sorry”, he said apologetically and clumsily tucked the chair under the table. He didn’t run out the door as usual. He grabbed my hand and pulled me over to plunk down on an oversized faded couch where he eagerly started leafing through the pages of the book until locating the picture of the Damselfly. “There it is with an illustration of the life-cycle.”, he said as his mother stepped back. He was glued to the page. Together we examined each stage of the nymph as it metamorphosed into adulthood.  He was quite content as we sat elbow to elbow slowly and carefully progressing from chapter to chapter. “I will leave this book with you. I finished it and don’t really need it anymore. So, you just go ahead and keep it if you like.” I said. He was engrossed in the illustrations, scrutinizing every detail so I didn’t disturb him as I slipped out the door.
     George’s mother was radiant when I arrived the next time. Her head moved up and down with approval as George moved along with the story, “It sw..swims in fr..fr…esh water.” His eyes were wide open and he was sitting straight up in the chair. “That book was really great!” George’s mother with a very happy tone in her voice. “He read the whole thing from front to back.” “I brought the next one, but it might take a little more time because it has a lot bigger words” I said. “You need to go out to play you have been sitting at this table a long time.” George’s mother said coaxingly. I never thought George would need encouragement to go outside. I guess he had worked very hard to read the whole book before I had arrived. Out the back door we headed down the hill for our usual jaunt in the woods. This week’s adventure George and I headed farther back through the boggy valley. The earthy moist air was perfumed with skunk cabbage. Small birds fluttered their wings above our heads. Squirrels made scolding noises as they clung to trees on opposite sides of the creek.  I carefully lifted my feet high above the sedge grass so my shoes would not get wet. George didn’t seem to care about wet feet. He tromped through the mud unaware of his feet, totally focused on the treasures we would find along the way. “What’s that?” he exclaimed. A clear, gelatinous, glob floated in a puddle. Each bubble had a dark center with a small curled comma shape. “Those are frog eggs”, I said. “The frogs hatch out into tadpoles which swim like fish until they develop legs. Then they become official frogs.” George was flabbergasted. It was as though I had told him about something that was impossible. “You are making that up, don’t tease me like that”, he said. “I am not making it up. It is in the second reader. You will see”.

    When I arrived the following week there was George sitting on the oversized, sun-bleached couch reading to his little sister. Her eyes looked up admiringly as he explained about the tadpoles.  His lime green sweater reflected brightly against his face. When he spotted me, he hopped up leaving his sister to look at the pictures. “I read about frogs today. You were right. They do start out like fish. Did you bring the next book?” Yes I had. 

Thursday, October 15, 2015

class lab for comparisons

This is what would be better for each web site https://www.zagat.com/r/grill-23-bar-boston http://www.opentable.com/ grill-23-and-bar 

https://www.zagat.com/r/grill-23-bar-boston  had a better rating system and they explained it better. they also gave the cost and the summary of the restaurant in a paragraph 

http://www.opentable.com/ grill-23-and-bar gave a star rating for each restaurant instead of explaining the rating system like Zagat

They both gave maps and a lot of reviews for each  restaurant they also gave a in depth description of each restaurant. in Conclusion i found that Zagat was better.

class lab 10/15

Things I did this week


How to a lot my time in school
Monday
 Do nothing but go to class
Tuesday  
Just go to class and take a nap this had ramifications of not getting more homework done
Wednesday
I decided to work on my math homework this had the ramification of  I was able to finish my homework
Thursday
Make my time useful working on math and writing this had ramifications of getting my Math homework done and my English mostly done  
Friday
This day has not come yet
Breakfast
Pancakes I was happy with my breakfast
Oatmeal I was not happy with my breakfast
Oatmeal and cereal I was happy with my breakfast
Oatmeal I was not happy with my breakfast

lunch
A nut bar I was not happy with my lunch
Peanut butter sandwich =happy
Peanut butter sandwich =happy
 A nut bar I was not happy with my lunch  

dinner
 fish= happy
Noodles =happy
Tofu salad happy
did not happen yet. 

Mad Men a Stillbirth of the american dream

Mad Men a Stillbirth of the american dream

   Heather Havrilesky's main insight came on page 175 with Matthew Weiner's telling, (the birth of the advertising age coincides directly with the birth of discontent as a nation-and what got lost in the hustle was our souls).this is her main insight because it was hinted at in the beginning on page 171 she said that (somehow mad men captures this ultra mediated, postmodern moment, underscoring the disconnect between the american dream and realty by distilling our deep-seated frustrations as a nation into painfully palpable vignettes.) she tells us that she is the critic at salon. She also tells us how america has gotten a sickness of always wanting more and that all Americans are instructed to hope for more, Because we are told repeated stories of the fairest in the land, the richest and the most heroic. She appeals to the readers emotions on page 174 with (the costumes and the props that come with the dream occasionally fail to obscure the confused humans who straiten their shoulders and dry their eyes and take the stage day after day dutifully mouthing lines about the thrills of work and family, all of it invented, peppy rhetoric of laundry detergent jingles.) I was not familiar with mad men before i read this, she gave me an interesting take on the but i would not want to watch it because it sounds like a soap opera that never ends. she does give a good description of the series.